Keynote Animation

My keynote animation is about spooky aliens and there travels, one of the aliens is searching for something on Saturn when all of a sudden they trip and fly of into space.

While floating off, the other alien comes to the rescue and picks the other one up and they go to earth. When they get to earth they run into this spooky sign as seen above. They end up fleeing just in time before the planet explodes.

When they think there safe... they're not..

While using Keynote, grouping shapes together was really helpful, and i guess having a topic that was easily changeable was cool too.

When we did peer-critiques we had to determine 2 things we liked and something they should improve on. People where saying the story was good and it easily established setting and the characters. The thing i should improve on, they said to make it longer than 30 seconds but yolo right?